autumn springs sunsets
sky blushes pink in surprise
~ she was blue, you see
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Eugi’s weekly prompt – autumn and d’Verse OLN from the future
Autumn ~ a haiku
autumn springs sunsets
sky blushes pink in surprise
~ she was blue, you see
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Eugi’s weekly prompt – autumn and d’Verse OLN from the future
Mindfills 
17 responses to “Autumn ~ a haiku”
Amazingly beautiful sunset
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Love the turn at the end!
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😁
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Wow! Superb ending! Bravo!
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😉 thanks Eugi
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My pleasure! 😊
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Fabulous ending!
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🥰thank you Linda
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I enjoy writing and reading haiku …. an awesome write.
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😊🙏I’m glad you liked it. I too like writing haiku. I think it captures the essence of a moment
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I noted the many ‘s’ sounds. Was it intentional? Seeing her blueness at the end and all.
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Hmmm… not really but I do get into alliterations 🙂 into how words sound in my head as I write
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Beautiful haiku and picture!
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Thank you 💕 I’m glad you liked it
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Oh, how wonderful! A powerful little punch of a poem ❤
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🙂 Thank you Sunra for your kind words
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