Is it always me
sipping on fizzy iced dreams
while the world treadmills
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seasons whizz past butter cups
warbling white eye drinks it in
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Mindfills by s.s. ~ a Solo Renga for
Reena’s exploration challenge is it always me
Colleen Cheesebro’s informative piece on Solo Renga. Thank you Colleen. I learnt something new 🙏
Thanks for guiding me to Colleen’s post on Solo Renga. You have done it beautifully.
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Thank you Reena.. and thank you for the interesting challenge this week
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Is it Solo Renga …. by s.s.
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Thank you so much Reena 🙏
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Love it! Have re-posted this composition here: https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/09/10/is-it-solo-renga-s-s-mindfills/
I’ve also tagged the various sites you listed at the bottom.
Thanks again for sharing your words. 🙂
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Thank you so much. You’re so kind. Glad you liked
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An outstanding write …. outstanding.
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🙏Thank you. Your very kind. I’m glad you liked it
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Love the spread of colors – so beautiful.
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Thank you for writing in and your kind comment
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It’s my pleasure 🙂
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Wow. Beautiful!
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Thank you for reading🙏 Glad you liked it
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Lovely crisp writing – and the ultimate question about identity and consciousness thrown in for good measure.
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Thank you so much. Gives me inspiration
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Very clearly done, absolutely beautiful 💜
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Thank you. Glad you like
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I did 💜
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