sparkle on fresh snow
window's winter frost cracks a smile
~meaning of sunrise
spring opens a door
tranquil burst of pink blossoms
~meaning of delight
crushed orange evenings
sands keep secrets warm all night
~meaning of summer
monsoon lashes out
at palm trees on river banks
~ meaning of nature
till the last leaf falls
distant red stars stay awake
~ what does it mean
Mindfills for The Skeptic’s Kaddish ~ W3 prompt by Denise de Vries. We are told to use an online generator for a prompt. I used the word generator, and got the word Significs ~ the science of meaning ; Kigo ~tranquil (nodoka, all spring)
20 responses to “significs ~ haiku”
calming, surreal and sublime imagery s.s.❣️
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Cindy….so kind of you. Thank you for reading💕
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It’s a pleasure always sangheera.. xo💞
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I agree with Cindy, Sangeetha – “sublime” is a perfect description for this.
❤
David
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David…thank you!happy you liked it😊
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You know I love your haiku ❤
BTW, this week's W3, hosted by the brilliant Brandon Ellrich, is now live 🙂
Enjoy ❤
~David
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🙂 🤍
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Wow! Well done.
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Sadje…your kind words really matter to me thank you
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You’re always welcome
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I like how the last line is a question, which made it more powerful.
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I’m glad it touched you. Thank you for reading:)
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Sangeetha,
Just FYI: this week’s W3, hosted by the brilliant Jaideep Khanduja, is now live:
Enjoy! ❤
~David
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🙏☺️
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