you stand by me in the day's bright sun
or in the pouring rain
with your feet firmed to bear us both
as much in joy as in strife
when life lets us know
we need our souls
to hold hands
and stay
one
dVerse’s Monday quadrille , prompt word – stand, hosted by Lisa & Reena’s exploration challenge – polysyndeton, – a literary device, creating complex sentences, by using conjunctions instead of commas.
14 responses to “stand by me ~ a quadrille”
Wonderful!
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❤️☺️
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Stand by me …… By s.s.
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Thank you Reena 😊 I hope I got the poetry form right
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Absolutely!
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A description of a solid relationship. I like your poem’s shape as well. Nicely done.
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Thank you Jade🙏☺️
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You’re welcome 🙂
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It’s a wonderful thing to have such a partner in life.
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Beautiful 🙏🏾💜
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Your appreciation means a lot to me. Thank you Jude
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😀🕊️
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