sunflares scorching
red weals on summer meadows
~ earth’s skin remembers
soft rose petal caresses
tattoos to trace in winter
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Mindfills by s.s. for
Frank Tassone’s Haikai challenge – natsumo (summer meadows)
sunflares scorching
red weals on summer meadows
~ earth’s skin remembers
soft rose petal caresses
tattoos to trace in winter
***
Mindfills by s.s. for
Frank Tassone’s Haikai challenge – natsumo (summer meadows)
14 responses to “natsumo ~ a tanka”
What a glorious photo! Yes, the skin of the earth remembers the gentle touch of rose petals. Lovely!
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It is a beautiful place. Thank you for writing in. I truly appreciate it 🙏
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #3: S.S.’ latest #tanka for my current #haikai challenge!
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Thank you🙏
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This is beautiful
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Thank you so much 🙂 I’m so glad you read it
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My pleasure 🌼
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I take it at face value and as a double entendre and love it both ways. Your photo is magnificent!
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Ah you got that! Nice 🙂 Thank you for writing in. The photo…. It’s a magnificent place…this lake in the Himalaya is truly magical
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the tracing tattooes in winter was a giveaway 😉 I believe you about the place!
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Haha… You got me there
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Thank you🙏
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