
My grandma's garden
Giant chrysanthemums rose over my head
I was just five then
The sun there rose to the smell of fresh bread
I'd go there again!
To listen to Grandma's stories in bed
Weave a daisy chain
Maybe I'll see her with her lipstick red
Calling out my name
For Colleen Cheesebro’s Birthday Tanka Tuesday ~ This week’s challenge is to create a syllabic form with 65 syllables, or a combination of words that amount to 65. I created the PhoneColl; Marsha Ingrao’s #WQ ~ tour guide – write about a place you know or a place you would like to go; Cee’s FOTD; NaPoRiMo ~ day 18
PhoneColl
- 9 line poem
- Lines 1,3,5,7,9 ~ 5 syllables
- Lines 2,4,6,8 ~ 10 syllables
- Rhyme scheme ~ ababababa
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34 responses to “My grandma’s garden ~ a PhoneColl”
Beautiful post for today 😀 😀
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Thank you cee!
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Sangeetha, what a gem you have here in this gorgeous photo and poem filled with memories. This is definitely one to tessellate! 🙂 Thanks for linking to WQ this week. 🙂
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Yayyy! I’m so happy you liked it. Thank you🌻💖
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Sangeetha, this is beautiful. Your poem made me miss my own dear grandmother. ❤️
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Happy Birthday Colleen 💐🎉
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Thank you, my dear Sangeetha. 🤗
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🤗
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Pluck each petal of memory; it will tell you a new story.
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So beautifully said ❣️
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Thanks! 😊
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Great title for your new form and I love what you did with it, Sangeetha.
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I love that you love it! Thank you 😊
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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Beautiful poem, sweet memories
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💖 Looking back is a lovely journey when grandmas are in it 🙂
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Yes indeed.
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Gorgeous memories!!
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Grandmothers make precious ones 🥰
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Lovely memories. Well done.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful ❤️
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What a beautiful memory you’ve shared with this poem, Sangeetha! I love it!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Yvette…I think we all carry with us the unconditional love of someone from our childhood. Thank you for your comment 😊
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Those are good memories! (K)
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🥰yes! Thank you for reading
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Beautiful poemand memories, Sangeetha 🙂
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😍Thank you for reading
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This is so delightful 💜
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😃happy you liked it
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I loved it 💜
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