Beauty, breathtakingly hypnotic
Time, a stroboscopic narcotic
Human, relinquish resistance
Rise above dubious existence
For Moonwashed Musings ~ dubious. Sammi Scribbles ~ breathtaking (14 words); dVerse OLN; Reena’s exploration challenge ~ word cloud – hypnosis, trance, entrainment, wavelength,stroboscopic; FOWC ~ relinquish; Cee’s FOTD
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20 responses to “Beauty ~ free verse”
Stunning take on the prompts, Sangeetha. Dubious as dubious does.
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Thanks Eugi 😉
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My pleasure!
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I prefer not to think of existence as “dubious”. Instead, I do look at my perceptions as dubious! Cool poem.
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Hmmm. That’s a thought. We do have a notion out here that life as we call it is all in our imagination. You’re right. Perception is a better word
Thanks so much for reading! 🙏🙂
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We just need to open our eyes and erase doubt!
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True. Not easy …but true 😊
Thank you for reading!
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Very nice!
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🙏🙂
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What a wonderful wordplay and mashup of prompts, in so few words 🙂
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🥰🙏
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Beauty — by Sangeetha
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🙏
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Reblogged this on Stine Writing and commented:
This morning on our walk I saw a similar flower, all by itself, mixed in with dead grass and sandy soil. I almost stopped to take a picture because it looks so pretty but so lonely. I almost wish I had now, seeing your photo!
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Thank you for the reblog! 😍🙏
Sometimes the ordinary random shot turns out to be a keeper 🙂
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truly beautiful, with vivid imagery that captures the reader’s imagination.
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So happy you liked it! Thank you for reading
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I love this… to nature humanness is dubious, Very nice to have you on the live session.
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Thank you for hosting Björn! I loved OLN 🙏😊
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