Date: March 13, 2023Author: Edge of Humanity Magazine
Written by Sangeetha
your side of the bed
pillow’s still depressed
wishing
the smell of your head
could change what you said
crying
as you sadly left
the sweet life we led
trying
Text © Sangeetha
My poem Your side of the bed has been published by Edge of Humanity Magazine !
Lai Poetry
A nine-line poem or stanza that uses an “a” and “b” rhyme following this pattern: aabaabaab. The lines with an “a” rhyme use 5 syllables; the “b” rhyme lines have 2 syllables.
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4 responses to “Your Side Of The Bed”
Such a poignant poem Sangeetha. Congratulations
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Sangeetha, this is a wonderful poem! It contains all the wistfulness and regret in one shallow dent in a pillow! Amazing!
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Thank you 💖 It’s one I’d written quite a while ago but it draws me in now and then
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