smoldering yearning
like hot summer mist rises
~ drenching thin clothes
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For Colleen Cheesebro’s Tanka Tuesday ~ Photo Challenge by Terri Webster Schrandt; kigo words ~ smoldering, thin clothes;
Mindfills © 2023
smoldering ~ haiku
smoldering yearning
like hot summer mist rises
~ drenching thin clothes
***
For Colleen Cheesebro’s Tanka Tuesday ~ Photo Challenge by Terri Webster Schrandt; kigo words ~ smoldering, thin clothes;
Mindfills © 2023
Mindfills 
22 responses to “smoldering ~ haiku”
Ooh nice! Love the word picture 💙
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I love that you said word picture 😍
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I can just imagine that!
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome.
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A lovely haiku, Sangeetha. I can feel the mist and the heat rising! Great imagery and sensory details! 💚🍀
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Thank you Colleen! Happy you liked it
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You’re welcome. 💚
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so beautiful but I won’t be dipping a toe into that.. 🤣
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Nope! Not a good idea 😅
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🙌💕
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Beautiful ❤
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Oh I’m so happy you liked it
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Makes me want to jump in some hot summer night.
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☺️ 🙏
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You are smart to not jump in–the water comes straight from snow melt. By summer the mist will be gone then paddleboarders enjoy the lake above the dam. Wonderful poem!
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😅 Thank you Terri. Glad you liked it
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You feel the spray 💜
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☺️💞
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I loved it, Sangeetha!
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Yvette…thank you so much 🙂
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