
Unsaid goodbyes
You don't realise
Burn all traces of trust
Unseeingly crush
Possibilities
Your fallibility
Falters,alters
This one chance
This one dance
Shifting, shuffling
Around the truth
Around our youth
We collided
No rule abided
No boundaries to lay
We say what we say
You and I
Threw away the why
Swore we'll never die
Now the light
Hides like shame
Which one to blame
Now we don't even fight
Doesn't feel right
Every midnight
A question mark
In the dark
As one of us tries
To silence the cries
Of unsaid goodbyes
Mindfills for Sammi Scribbles ~ midnight (94 words)
16 responses to “unsaid goodbyes ~ free verse”
So evocative
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Thank you
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My pleasure
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In truths, the loss of innocence is always the most obvious and heartbreaking.
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Beautifully said
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Thank you…
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Ommigosh, Sangeetha ~ this is just stunning…. gorgeous…
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ben Alexander 🤗
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Heartfelt and touching. 🤍
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Destiny …it touched you. Thank you 🤍
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Very very good!
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Wow! Superb!
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Thank you Eugenia
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My pleasure!
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Truly incredible S!
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