
one by one
the stars fall for the river
drowning in the sad moonlight
silently
just like me
on a heartbreak
heart and words melting
telling my story
one shot at a time
in the face of
the bartender's apathy
Mindfills for Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt ~ Apathy (40 words)
17 responses to “one by one ~ free verse”
Wow!! Beauty, Sangeetha. 🙂
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😉 Thank you Aishwarya. You’re lovely
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Beautiful
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Tanvir…thank you for reading 🙂
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Fantastic piece of writing ❤
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I’m so glad you came by. Lovely of you to write in. Thank you
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How many sad tales can he tell?! Lovely Sangeetha.
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Dora🤗
I love the way you read. Thank you so much
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The world is often apathetic to the state of the heart… this is wonderfully poignant.
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‘Apathetic to the state of heart’…you should write a song 🥰🙏
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Having run bars for many a year, your beautifully written piece took me back.
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Oh I’m so happy it spoke to you. I think poetry brings up a moment in our lives and we watch ourselves relive it 😊
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Bartenders can be that way, Nicely done. 🙂
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Thank god for bartenders though 🙂
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Indeed. Self service would never work. 🙂
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😅
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They’re the place where stories go
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