Up on the hill, dawn breaks into
a pink smile. Something tells me this athlete runs with a novel resolve to endure the pain and complete his 10k. Two friends park their red car, sync steps and Strava, and strut off on a no-nonsense calorie burning uphill march.
I walk into the first week of the year as if I have never felt the forest. Breathe in the possibilities. Perhaps an adventure into a trail I've always seen but never taken is what I need to jumpstart the year. Hmmm...maybe tomorrow with the other shoes. I walk on.
still flowing fresh
on sun-crusted layered rocks
~ wisdom of the hills
Mindfills for Tanka Tuesday ~ synonyms for new (fresh, novel) and experience ; dVerse Haibun ~ the beginning of the year; MLM photo challenge;
34 responses to “Up ~ a haibun”
As a trail runner myself, I really dig this one. Happy New Year, Sangeetha. Dawn’s pink smile is a beautiful image.
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Nice! I run…and I’ve been thinking trails. Happy New Year
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Excellent take
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Sadje…Thank you for reading! Have a lovely day🌞
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Thanks, you too
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Wow!! This is a beautiful write. 🙂
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Thanks Aishwarya ☺️ I really did go for that walk up the hill this morning!
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This Haibun is special then. Lovely, Sangeetha. 🙂
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Very nicely written, Sangeetha, from the dawn breaking into a pink smile to the wisdom of the hills – great use of personification. Enjoy walking through the new year!
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Happy everyday Kim! Thank you for reading 😊
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Sangeetha this is a delight to read both the prose and the haiku. The perfect combination for a Haibun!
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I’m delighted you like it Val 🙂
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Sangeetha, this haibun is so full of new beginnings and energy! I love the personification of “dawn’s pink smile, and the “wisdom of the hills.” Happy New Year!
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Happy New year Colleen! I’m so happy you liked the Haibun. Thank you 💕
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You’re so welcome. Here’s to a new year of poetry! Yay!!
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This is absolutely splendid! I especially love; “I walk into the first week of the year as if I have never felt the forest. Breathe in the possibilities.” Happy New Year! 💘💘
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Sanaa…I’m so happy those words appealed to you! Happy new year 🙂
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Yes, there’s different ways to walk, different places and paces. Let the “wisdom of the hills” be your guide.
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So beautifully expressed 🤍Thank you for reading
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Sangeetha, what a marvelous and life-affirming way to begin the year. Loved your haibun.
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Thanks so much! Your appreciation means a lot to me. Happy New Year
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You’re most welcome ❤
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Getting out into the world is always a good start to any year. (K)
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True! Opens up the world 🙂
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Beautiful, Sangeetha! I love the personification and alliteration. 🙂
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Yvette…I’m so happy you liked it 🙂
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Sangeetha, this haibun is so alive! ❤
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Thank you David. So happy you liked it😊
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A lovely poem, Sangeetha. And the photo is extraordinary.
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Thank you! The photo was posted as a prompt 🙂
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