Candy floss clouds
trail sirens of sunset
in foolish hope
of a maybe
Twilight rains
icy blue frost
dressed up
in sparkles
Window pane shivers
impatiently waiting
for your silk voice
to melt the cold
I wait for you
my winter-cozy;
Come home to soup
Yours, warmly
Mindfills for dVerse quadrille (a poem of 44 words) ~ warmly;
22 responses to “candy ~ a quadrille”
Lovely – leaves me feeling warm inside 🙂
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Sangeetha, I love the vivid imagery you use to describe cold and warm. The waiting for warmth is a big aspect of the cold season isn’t it. Warm soup really hits the spot ❤
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You’re absolutely right. It’s the waiting for warmth…
Thank you for reading and writing in🙏
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You’re very welcome ❤
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Such pretty poetry, and a cozy scene of warmth. Now I am just ready to curl up this evening. Awaiting my winter-cozy . . . I have beans on the stove!
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Haha…exactly😄 Thank you for reading!
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This poem is cozy! It makes me want to curl up with a big mug of Hot Cocoa!
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That’s winter yearnings for you😍🤗
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There is that sort of chill only another person can banish. You capture that beautifully here. Love the dental floss opening image.
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I love that…a cold only another person can banish..💞 Thank you!
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You’re welcome. 😉 Stay warm, friend.
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You too 🙂
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Home and soup sound like a perfect combo.
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It’s winter. It’s all we need 😄 Thank you for reading Björn!
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Cosy comforts. 🤗
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Right? 🙂 Thanks Punam 🤍
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Unique take on the prompt, Sangeetha. 🙂
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Glad you read it Aishwarya 🤍
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🙂
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What perfect ways to feel the warmth!
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Glad you felt it 😊
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