David & Sangeetha‘s new poetry project
David of The skeptic’s kaddish and I began a fun poetry partnership in April. We just celebrated writing together a 100 verse renga, The Hyakuin 🙂 And within days, decided we would absolutely love to continue our writing collaboration and what has grown to be a warm friendship with a new poetry project
We’ve decided to explore poetry forms, one each from A to Z. Each week one of us chooses a poetry form the other responds to. David suggested we title it Form verses creativity 🙂 This week we are writing – a Verso-Rhyme. We’d love it if you want to respond with a of Verso-Rhyme your own!
David‘s Verso-Rhyme
Today we celebrate
Israel's birth,
A dream two thousand years
in the making.
Tearful Jewish prayers
heard across Earth ~
t'wards & for our one home,
unforsaken!
Sangeetha‘s Verso-Rhyme
Israel's hearts ~ Rejoice
We have come far
Holding fast to our Faith
Holding Honour
Israel's voices ~ Sing
Hymns of the Star
Light bright candles for Peace
Light Forever!
Verso-Rhyme?
- a poem in 8 lines;
- syllabic, 6-4-6-4-6-4-6-4 syllables per line;
- rhyme, x/a/x/b/x/a/x/b, with ‘x’ being unrhymed;
- ends with an exclamation point!
6 responses to “Form Verses Creativity ~ verso rhyme”
Well done!! A shout and a following echo!
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Haha…yes. David wrote this for Israel’s independence day. Im honoured to be part of it:)
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