
Much worn slippers at the end of the line
That soft holey tee shirt I claimed as mine
The extra pillow you like to hug
Brown coffee stains still splayed on our rug
Mystery novel lies bookmarked at page 82
The lillies flowered; they turned out blue
Window pane drips drops of rain
Eyes blur at never seeing you again
Mindfills for Sadje’s wdys, dVerse’s OLN hosted by Jade – Golden wait
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So tragic! I felt the pain of loss deep in my soul. Beautiful poem Sangeetha. Thanks for joining in
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The little reminders that are left behind, a coffee stain, the plants that were potted together. This is so evocative and beautiful. 🙂
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😔 thank you
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The loss is palpable! It is the little reminders that have the biggest impact….
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Yeah…so they are. Thank you for reading 🙂
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Ah, so poignant. Like others have said, it’s the little reminders…
Beautifully written, Sangeetha.
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Thank you. I’m glad you think so 🙂
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Wonderful created poignant scene well done.
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💮Mason…thank you so much 💮
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Real, and raw sadness, emptiness…so beautifully written, about moments on our journeys we will never forget…
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Reminds me of this…
“How lucky I am to have something that makes saying goodbye so hard..” Winnie the Pooh
Thank you so much for reading and writing in 💮
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Sangeetha, I was snuggling into the comfort of your poem and the the last line gave such a sense of loss…
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😔 As we go through life carrying precious moments….
It’s lovely of you to share how you felt. Keeps me writing… Thank you
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You are very welcome ❤
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