
All it ever takes, is a single breath,
a tendril touch that leaves the heart agape,
wondrousness springing in velveteen stealth,
imbuing blush pink in every cloudscape
of my lost soul that just met its mirror
this beatific, erotic reflection
staring unblinking at the other
in the afterglow of recognition
Your eyes that look through mine and goes beyond
our time and space and imagination
into worlds we resolve to build and bond
where we are limitless; yet, we are one
merging, melding, in the infinity,
all in that one sweet breath you took with me
***
Mindfills of s.s. for Cee’s FOTD, OctPoRiMo – sonnet ABABCDCD EFEFG 10 syllables in each line, using words agape, erotic, breath, wondrousness, dVerse OLN, Eugi’s weekly prompt – afterglow, FOWC resolve
Oh my this is so romantic! And I mean that in the very best way possible.
“All it ever takes, is a single breath,
a tendril touch that leaves the heart agape,” These words are so very tender…..
and then the last three lines: be still my heart!
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Awww you’re the sweetest. What lovely words you write. Thank you. I’m so glad you liked it.
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My mind is blown. This is simply gorgeous…
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David…I’m so glad you think so ☺️
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Whoa! That is seriously a beautiful sonnet!! And I have to agree with lillian that the last 3 lines pull it together and make it sing!
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Im feeling blessed to have you say so ☺️ Thank you for reading. I’m glad it touched you
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So beautifully penned!
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🙏🙂
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Oh, my! This is a stunning and beautifully written piece. Bravo!
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Hey…I’m so glad you liked it Eugi 😃
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My pleasure!
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