A new sun sprints across skies
as ripe golden beams surprise
extreme scowls into bright smiles
Watch a while...Oh how time flies
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FOWC extreme & MLM’s synonyms (young(new), old(ripe), yellow(golden), run(sprint), frown(scowl)) & Sadje’s what do you see.
Written in englyn cyrch – a Welsh poetry form – quatrains of 7 syllables per line, lines 1,2,4 rhyme with each other and line 3 rhymes with a syllable somewhere in the middle of line 4.
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12 responses to “a new sun ~ an englyn cyrch”
How time does flies. Beautiful poem Sangeetha. Thanks for joining in
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While we are sleeping…especially last year. Thank you Sadje for your thoughtful words🙏
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You’re welcome ☺️
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So it does! I can’t believe it’s October already.
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I can’t believe 2021 is almost up! Thank you for reading dear Chris 🙂
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Beautiful. I have never heard of that poetry form before.
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Thanks for reading and writing in. I too found the form interesting. Quite a while ago…I thought I’d try writing poetry … By the alphabet. 😃 E Shows how far I’ve come.
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😅 Keep going!
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Most likely at the same comfortable pace 😂
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What a cool form! 😀
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It was fun writing. Thank you for reading 💖
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