
raindrops still stuck to his raincoat
he stopped for a moment to note
then towards me he seemed to float
he cocked his crowned head to the side
with a gleeful glint in his eyes
he flashed me a sweet smile so wide
Sir peacock could not be ignored
he smugly slipped into my heart
what wild words he said I forgot
but they were just love and pure art
so a poem on him I wrote
Mindfills for dVerse – Grace asks us to write a Zéjel. – 8 syllable lines,stanzaic, opening with a mono-rhymed triplet followed by any number of quatrains. Rhymed, the rhyme of the opening mudanza establishes a linking rhyme with the end line of the succeeding quatrains. Rhyme scheme, aaa bbba ccca …
This is beautiful Sangeetha
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Thank you Sadje. I’m so glad you liked it 💕
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful poem ,Sangeetha !Thanx for sharing 1
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Sangeetha,
What a delightful encounter! Lovely write.
pax,
dora
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Dora 🙂 Thanks so much
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My pleasure. 🙂
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Love the idea of falling in love with a peacock – could be taken literally or figuratively.
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There’s a story in that😄
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Flows beautifully – I love this!
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I’m glad you liked it Grace. Thank you 💕
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A fitting tribute to a proud peacock!
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😊thank you for reading and writing in
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Sir Peacock always has his way of charming his way.
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That he does..and how! 😊 Thank you for reading
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