sky stays blue, bathing the pond
a cloud drifts past hurriedly
etched on a park bench are our letters
random signs of the universe
midnight pauses as if she cares
which stars to pick for today
you don't notice when I'm here
you won't notice when I'm gone
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dVerse’s Poetics – hosted by Sanaa – The korean Kasa. Thank you Sanaa for introducing this poetic form on dVerse π & for Eugi’s weekly prompt – midnight
The elements of the Kasa, (song-words) are:
1. syllabic, 7-syllable lines broken by caesura into alternating groups of 3 and 4 syllables or 8 syllable lines broken by caesura into equal 4 syllable phrases. These options are guides with variables at the discretion of the poet.
2. strophic. Groups of variable numbers of lines as opposed to uniform stanzas.
3. content is described or exposed through parallels. This is the heart of the form.
4. written from unrequited love, patriotism, daily life, nostalgia, etc
I was curious to know why there’s not much on this poetry form. A wordpress site has this to say about the gasa/kasa.
Unrequited love is always a problem
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…and so we write π Thank you for reading and your words!
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I love your poem and the poetry form and thank you for sharing the link to the WP site.
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Thank you Eugi for your weekly prompt π Gets us all writing
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My pleasure!
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This line is brilliant. Wow, Sangeetha!
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David
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Thank you David π
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This is absolutely stunning in its portrayal of heartache.. sigh especially love; “midnight pauses as if she cares
which stars to pick for today.” Thank you so much for writing to the prompt ππ
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π Sanaa! I’m so so happy you liked it… I loved writing the kasa…it felt unstructured and still lyrical
Thank you for sharing β€οΈ
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