a tender night hums
fireflies mimic starlight
dreams drift on ~ seeking
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a renga for….
dusk draws the day’s drapes
softening sounds of sunlight
~ a lullaby yawns twilight nestles newborn in
night transformed by tender tunes
Ripples ~ This renga is a collaborative writing effort of David of The Skeptic’s Kaddish and me of Mindfills. David’s words, completing the tanka, are in italics and in bold. What started with this haiku is now a renga of 40 verses π You can read all about our journey here and you can read the rest of the renga here βΊοΈ.
Lots of love and gratitude to you all for reading and your kind words of appreciation. π
a tender night hums
fireflies mimic starlight
dreams drift on ~ seeking
Polaris paving phantasms
projecting paths pellucid
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πβΊοΈ you’re brilliant!
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takes one to know one π
(thank you)
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by the way – I can’t seem to find ripples #31-34 on your blog… do you have them?
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if not on your blog, perhaps in your email?
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π
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Yes. Check now. I’ve reposted
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They’re all here too
https://mindfills.wordpress.com/2021/05/24/ripples-a-renga-4/
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Thanks π
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π€β€οΈhttps://mindfills.wordpress.com/2021/07/21/ripples-41-a-renga/
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