look into my eyes
turn the pages of my mind
watch the words tessellate
you and I
turn the pages of my mind
celebrate the poetry
rhyming our lives
watch the words tessellate
sync our worlds in song
Oh the lyrics feel just right
you and I
keep making up stories
in each other's eyes
***
Mindfills for
dVerse poetry form ~ Trimeric, hosted by Grace
Reena’s exploration challenge
Eugi’s weekly prompt ~ celebration
1. Trimeric has 4 stanzas
2. The first stanza has 4 lines
3. The other three stanzas have 3 lines each
4. The first line of each stanza is a refrain of the corresponding line in the first stanza (so 2nd stanza starts with the second line, third stanza starts with the third line, etc.).
5. The sequence of lines, then, is abcd, b – -, c – -, d – -.
No other rules on line length, meter, or rhyme.
40 responses to “you and I ~ a trimeric”
“watch the words tesselalate.”
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☺️🙏thank you for reading
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Corrected😅 it’s one of my favourite words…thank you so much for noticing
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Beautiful! I’m thinking of all the situations where ‘tessellate’ can be applied, other than thought processes.
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Ha 😬 I love that word. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the prompt
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I loved it too.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
You and I ….a trimeric by s.s.
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Thank you for the reblog 🙏
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Beautiful poem Sangeetha
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I’m so glad you liked it Sadje ❤️
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❤️
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❤️
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☺️🌻
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I love this line: watch the words tessellate
Thank you for this sweet duet of songs.
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Those are sweet words. Thank you so much Grace 🥰
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Simply simple and beautiful in its simplicity. Thanks.
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Thank you Ron. I love your witty ‘scrambled, not fried’ 🙂
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A beautiful post 👌👌
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Thanks KK. So happy you got to read it
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Beautiful and I love the refrains! Thank you for joining in.
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Absolutely my pleasure writing for your celebration ☺️
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Thank you for your kind comment! 😊
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Lovely ideas and imagery you’ve conjured here, Mindfills 🙂
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Thanks so much. I’m so glad you liked it 😊
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the refrains turned this into an effective call.
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thank you for reading..writer 😊🙏
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I learned a new word in the process of reading this thoroughly delightful Trimeric!
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Oh I’m so glad you enjoyed it . And I enjoyed writing it. Love that word 😊
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Darn good trimeric! It’s simplicity speaks volumes.
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Thank you☺️🙏 I like what your words say
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sounds like a compatible, interactive pair. I like the intimacy these two share with each other.
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🥰Thank you for saying that Jade
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You’re very welcome.
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S.S.,
“Watch the words tessellate” — says it all about the remarkable communication between this pair of lovers! Wonderfully done.
pax,
dora
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Your lovely words made my day! Thank you
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You’re welcome!
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Such a beautiful expression of true love: it’s reciprocal, just like that!
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Thank you so much Ingrid for your kind words ☺️
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