holding on to earth
daffodils reach for the sky
stretching all that’s real
twisting tesseract appears
folding nature on itself
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Written in response to
preserving prayers
paradise plants seeds of hope
in every dew drop
daffodils drawing diet
from damp delectable dirt
Ripples ~ This renga is a collaborative writing effort of David of The Skeptic’s Kaddish and me of Mindfills. David’s words, completing the tanka, are in italics and in bold. What started with this haiku is now a renga of 28 verses 🙂 You can read all about our journey here and you can read the rest of the renga here ☺️
holding on to earth
daffodils reach for the sky
stretching all that’s real
twisting tesseract appears
folding nature on itself
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I love the word tesseract 😍 Perfect David
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U gat ryme
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😊thanks for writing in
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Beautiful! Giving life to simple elements is such an artistic thing!
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Thank you Garima ☺️🙏
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