water ~ an argonelle

water
rushing down mountain slopes
mingling salt, souls, and sacred sky
making life without knowing why
quenching, drenching heart’s hopes
water

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Mindfills for

Sadje’s what do you see
Eugi’s weekly prompt – mingle
dVerse OLN hosted by MsJadeLi
Marsha Ingrao’s WQWWC – Hope
I’m also trying a new form of syllabic poetry…Argonelle which is a quintain (or a string of quintains) with 2/6/8/8/6 syllable count and abccb rhyme

38 thoughts on “water ~ an argonelle

    1. Thank you so much πŸ™. The words are mine and the image is Sadje’s. You can read her wonderful blog. The link is on my post πŸ™‚

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  1. Well written Sangeetha! I celebrate the veracity and power of your words. May you continue always sharing only your authentic self β€” that alone makes you genuine, meaningful to read, and of worth to be heard! SΓ­ochΓ‘in!

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  2. Those are powerful words. Inspiring. I truly value your opinion. Thank you so much for taking time out to really read and share your thoughts. πŸ™

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