water
rushing down mountain slopes
mingling salt, souls, and sacred sky
making life without knowing why
quenching, drenching heart’s hopes
water
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Mindfills for
Sadje’s what do you see
Eugi’s weekly prompt – mingle
dVerse OLN hosted by MsJadeLi
Marsha Ingrao’s WQWWC – Hope
I’m also trying a new form of syllabic poetry…Argonelle which is a quintain (or a string of quintains) with 2/6/8/8/6 syllable count and abccb rhyme
Mindfills 
38 responses to “water ~ an argonelle”
Beautifully written poem Sangeetha. Thanks for joining in
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Thank you for a beautiful picture Sadje
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It’s a pleasure
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Excellent take on prompts and a beautifully written poem! Thank you so much for joining in.
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Your words mean a lot to me 🙂 thank you for hosting an interesting challenge each week.
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My pleasure!
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Lovely! 🌷
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💕🙏
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Good choice with water as beginning and end. You capture its essence between the anchors very well!
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❣️😊🙏
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A thoughtful poem. Well penned.
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🙏thank you for reading and writing in ❣️
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This form intrigues me. I like what you’ve done with it.
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It is a new form for me… Thank you for reading 🙂
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“mingling salt, souls, and sacred sky” — wonderful, mystical imagery!
peace, Jason
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I like that line too 🙂 Thank you so much for taking time to read and write in 💕
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You’re welcome!
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Nicely done. I intend to try an argonelle for myself tomorrow. 🙂
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Great! It’s great reading your work. Looking forward to reading your argonelle 🙂
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Good for you tying all these prompts together. 🙂
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Haha …I try. Thanks for reading and writing in
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You’re welcome.
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wise words and lovely accompanying image.
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Thank you so much 🙏. The words are mine and the image is Sadje’s. You can read her wonderful blog. The link is on my post 🙂
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Will do. Enjoy your day ☀️
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I love the gentle pace of your poem, Sangeetha.
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Thank you so much Chris. Sadje’s image helped 🙂
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They’re always inspiring!
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True 🙂
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Well written Sangeetha! I celebrate the veracity and power of your words. May you continue always sharing only your authentic self — that alone makes you genuine, meaningful to read, and of worth to be heard! Síocháin!
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Those are powerful words. Inspiring. I truly value your opinion. Thank you so much for taking time out to really read and share your thoughts. 🙏
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Lovely. A brilliant combination of the prompts too. KL ❤
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Thank you KL. Lovely of you to read and send words ☺️
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Beautiful poem, indeed hopefull!
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😊🙏
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