time trickles away
moments melt into maybes
spring blossoms again
designing the universe
from her whimsical viewpoint
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dVerse OLN hosted by Linda, Eugi’s weekly prompt – viewpoint, MindLoveMisery’s photo challenge hosted by Neeraj
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21 responses to “time trickles ~ a tanka”
“moments melt into maybes” — a wonderful line in the mind and on the lips. Peace ~Jason
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😊 I’m so glad it touched you. Thank you for reading and writing in
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Delightful tanka and, “moments melt into maybes” – fabulous line. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you Eugi. I’m glad you liked it
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Most welcome! 😊
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“moments melt into maybes” —- a terrific phrase. I enjoyed your poem.
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Don’t they 🙂 Thank you so much for reading and writing in
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I love reading and writing tanka …. this is quite lovely!!! The connecting line perfect.
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Thank you for reading and your kind words 😊
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Let’s face it, we know who is boss 🙂
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😉 😀
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So good! This is so true and sad: “moments melt into maybes”. Great line by line work.
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Benjamin…thank you so much. I truly value your thoughts. You’re a fabulous writer. I love how your poetry is powerful and gentle at the same time. Thank you for writing 🙏
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You’re welcome. There’s so much to like here at your blog, from short to long you just know how to write effectively! And: wow, I appreciate your assessment of my writing. That’s so nice to hear 🙂
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Absolutely a pleasure
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Lovely Tanka!
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Thank you so much Linda 🥰 Glad you liked it
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Beautiful poetry.
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🙏🙂 Jude…Thank you
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very much my pleasure.
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