touched by a moonbeam
tranquil lake shivers silver
~ripples reach my ears
listening closely, I hear
lowest hanging clouds murmur
hanging clouds murmur
mischief firing up some fun
~pillow fight follows
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Mindfills of s.s for
David from The skeptic’s kaddish who added lovely lines to the haiku I wrote… and so …shall we renga on? 😊
Mindfills 
7 responses to “ripples ~ a renga”
touched by a moonbeam
tranquil lake shivers silver
~ripples reach my ears
listening closely, I hear
lowest hanging clouds murmur
hanging clouds murmur
mischief firing up some fun
~pillow fight follows
sudden unexpected kiss
below falling down feathers
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😁Awesome David
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David It’s been such a joy 🙂 Thank you for writing
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Beautifully penned peace-filled lines. Love the whimsical note in the last line 😊 Congrats to you and David, nicely done. Cheers
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😀Thank you Suzette for being such a lovely writer and an encouraging voice in this community 🙏
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Oh thank you for the wonderful comment. I appreciate your words greatly. 🙏
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🧸 Suzette 🧸
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