touched by a moonbeam
tranquil lake shivers silver
~ripples reach my ears
Mindfills of s.s. for RDP – tranquil
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touched by a moonbeam
tranquil lake shivers silver
~ripples reach my ears
Mindfills of s.s. for RDP – tranquil
Mindfills 
53 responses to “ripples ~ a haiku”
Just beautiful and soul-soothing!
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As are your words 🙂 thank you
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touched by a moonbeam
tranquil lake shivers silver
~ripples reach my ears
listening closely, I hear
lowest hanging clouds murmur
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Oh so beautiful 🥰…a Tanka
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David…check this out
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cool 😁 I love this idea!
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