Deeper and deeper into Time
where when warps and does a cartwheel
for free romantic hearts to steal
moments for each other to rhyme
floating off to a space sublime
Stars burst in synchronicity
laughing with clocks and gravity
oneness of the universe smiles
when souls meld, we stop a while
we wonder…in the infinity
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Mindfills of s.s. for
Sue Vincent’s #writephoto – deeper
Reena’s exploration challenge – components of Time
Eugi’s weekly prompt – romance
Ronovan’s Decima challenge – Steal in B abbaaccddc
The last three lines are awesome.
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Time really does take us wandering….wondering ☺️
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Deeper ….by s.s.
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Beautifully done, Sangeetha 🙂
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Thank you Sue ☺️
I’m so glad you read it
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I always do 🙂
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🤗
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“Stars burst in synchronicity
laughing with clocks and gravity”
What evocative imagery!
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🙏😊thank you for reading and writing in. I’m so glad you liked those lines
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You are welcome, Sangeetha. 😊
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Stunning piece! I love the rhyming, the imagery, and the last 3 lines are amazing. Thank you for joining in.
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Thank you Eugenia. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Thank you for your encouragement
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My pleasure!
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Sangeetha,
I love the poem – but even more than that – I love the concept of this poem!
Lovely!
-David
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I’m so glad 🙂 I’d like to think Time isn’t linear….there are moments that stay with you a lifetime and years that just vanish
Makes me think that it’s the moments that define our time for us
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