
at last
finding herself
completely unprepared
gobsmacked under a mistletoe
first kiss
***
mindfills of s.s.
For Colleen Cheesebro’s Tanka Tuesdays – my first cinquain 2/4/6/8/2 Holiday tradition
Getting lost is not a waste of time
at last
finding herself
completely unprepared
gobsmacked under a mistletoe
first kiss
***
mindfills of s.s.
For Colleen Cheesebro’s Tanka Tuesdays – my first cinquain 2/4/6/8/2 Holiday tradition
Sangeetha, the shape of your poem is so suggestive! I love it π
-David
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π Blame it on the syllablic cinquain….Happy New year David. Happy writing!
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So beautiful. What a great holiday memory and tradition that first kiss. β€
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I’m so glad you liked it Colleen π Wishing you a wonderful year ahead β€οΈ
-Sangeetha
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Danger that, thank you. Happy New Year. β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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This feels like you wrote a big story even though the words are so few! Awesome work.
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Thank you so much Benjamin for such wonderfully worded appreciation π
Wish you Happy new years π
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