Lonely comes from knowing you
liked morning to kiss your lips
lulled from dream drenched slumberings,
little aware of my heart
longing for your mulled murmurs,
lured into sweet pain of hope.
Lonely comes from knowing you
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Mindfills of s.s. for
dVerse Pleiades – This week’s Poetics Challenge – Write a poem using the PLEIADES FORM (click HERE for MTB 16/10/14 post on this). Pick a ONE-WORD TITLE then write a SEVEN-LINE poem of SEVEN SYLLABLES whereby each line begins with the FIRST LETTER of your title.
Reena’s exploration challenge – lean into loneliness
dVerse OLN hosted by Sanaa
Mindfills 
Lonely comes from knowing you …. is such a haunting line.
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I’m glad the words connected with you Reena. Thank you for your appreciation 🙂
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You are welcome!
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Lonely …… by s.s.
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This is incredibly evocative. Love those “dream drenched slumberings.” 💝
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Thank you so much. Really appreciate your appreciation. You’re an amazing writer 🙂
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Loved this piece of art from you… keep doing this type of stuff… I’ve followed you now… lots of love.. 😊
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Thank you🙏
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A sad poem and a relationship on the down hill slide! Very good poem!
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Thank you for reading and writing in 🙂
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You are welcome.
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Beautiful use of the form, it is seamless. That last line clinches the yearning mood in the rest.
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Thank you Jade. I truly appreciate your reading my work and writing in
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You’re welcome. My pleasure!
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Love is worth the risk of loneliness. Beautiful Pleiades.
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I love your words. That was my thought when I wrote 🙂 Thank you so much
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I am so glad to have seen this today.
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🙂
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Well written, and right on the form.
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Thank you so much. Really appreciate you taking time to write in
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Deep
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I’m glad you read this one 🙂 Thank you
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🙏🏾🌼
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Very nice. Perhaps it’s true to a great extent. Loneliness is found through our connection to other people. Such an interesting concept.
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Loneliness could be about not having…most times I think it’s a reminder of what you’ve had and how you’ve felt
Thank you for reading and writing in.
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Very true. You’re welcome.
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