cold November rain
falling, drenching you and me
in warm onesomeness
that everlasting moment
heart-wrapped in a word called love
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Mindfills for
Colleen Cheesebro’s Tanka Tuesdays – poets choice
Ronovan Writes Haiku challenge – fall and cold
Eugi’s weekly challenge prompt – Everlasting
d’Verse Poetics What does November mean to you
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19 responses to “November rain ~ a tanka”
Learned a new word onesomeness! Like it!
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Im glad you liked it. It feels good in my head. Even if it’s not an actual word…it should be 🙂
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A beautiful and heartfelt piece and I love the word onesomeness. Thank you for joining in.
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Thank you 🙂 yes. I agree onesomeness feels just right
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much
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That sounds lovely 🙂
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😊 it does doesn’t it…
Thank you
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Beautiful well-needed sentiments. I love it! ❤
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I’m glad you liked it 🙂 thanks so much
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You’re most welcome. 💙
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Twosomenesses are good too! It feels good to think love warms cold November!! Well penned.
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😀yes twosomeness is great. Thanks for reading and taking time to write in
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Stunning tanka that absolutely filled my heart … cheers.
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Thank you so much. Your kindness encourages me to keep writing
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