the more I live ~ a decima

Of Time and lifetime of a kiss

the more I live, the less I know

of moments moving fast or slow

of memories we made to miss

of ecstacy and lulling bliss

of the mulled minutes we pine for

of yesterday and tomorrow

of that one precious pink sunset

of that lifetime our lips first met

the more I live, the less I know

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Linked to lulling ~ a haiku

in the fading light

time drips drops of memories

lulling reality

Written by Mindfills, s.s., for

Ronovan Writes Decima challenge – bliss in A rhyme

Sarah Southwest at dVerse’s interesting treasure hunt…  what 3words challenge. I chose pink.pine.minute

Crispina Kemp’s creative challenge #101

14 thoughts on “the more I live ~ a decima

      1. I read everyone’s answer to the challenge, and always make comment, short or long. I might sometimes be late to it, but I don’t leave you without some form of feedback.
        I enjoy the challenge as much as you do

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  1. Nicely done. A bit of alliteration making the decima easy to read silently or aloud. Kind of musical, which is what Latin American countries often use this form for. The connection with the haiku challenge was excellent as well.

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    1. This is the first time I’ve connected the Decima and Haiku… Thank you for both the challenges. And for the shi Rensa. I’m so glad you liked the Decima and noticed the alliterations

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