
Of Time and lifetime of a kiss
the more I live, the less I know
of moments moving fast or slow
of memories we made to miss
of ecstacy and lulling bliss
of the mulled minutes we pine for
of yesterday and tomorrow
of that one precious pink sunset
of that lifetime our lips first met
the more I live, the less I know
***
Linked to lulling ~ a haiku
in the fading light
time drips drops of memories
lulling reality
Written by Mindfills, s.s., for
Ronovan Writes Decima challenge – bliss in A rhyme
Sarah Southwest at dVerse’s interesting treasure hunt… what 3words challenge. I chose pink.pine.minute
14 responses to “the more I live ~ a decima”
This is lovely – the rhythm gives it such movement. I like all the references to time, culminating in the lifetime of a kiss. The most precious thing. Lovely writing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you ☺️ I’m so glad you liked it
LikeLike
[…] Linked to Mindfills -The more I live – Ronovan Writes Decima challenge […]
LikeLiked by 1 person
I like the repetitive form. Gives it good rhythm, unites the lines 🙂
LikeLike
Thank you so much for writing in 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I read everyone’s answer to the challenge, and always make comment, short or long. I might sometimes be late to it, but I don’t leave you without some form of feedback.
I enjoy the challenge as much as you do
LikeLiked by 1 person
I really appreciate your genuine interest. You’ve inspired all of us with your challenge 🙂 Thank you
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙃😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nicely done. A bit of alliteration making the decima easy to read silently or aloud. Kind of musical, which is what Latin American countries often use this form for. The connection with the haiku challenge was excellent as well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is the first time I’ve connected the Decima and Haiku… Thank you for both the challenges. And for the shi Rensa. I’m so glad you liked the Decima and noticed the alliterations
LikeLiked by 1 person
[…] Mindfills: The More I Live […]
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautifully executed 💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much 🙂 I’m glad you think so
LikeLike
I really do 💜
LikeLiked by 1 person