
arrows of geese shoot
across autumn’s orange skies
auguring winter
apricot leaves stitch the earth
a warm coat of eiderdown
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Mindfills by s.s. for
Frank Tassone’s Haikai Challenge on Fall foliage or geese (kari)
MindLoveMisery’s Sunday writing prompt – change of seasons
Cee’s pick me up – autumn is the hush before winter
That’s pretty to think about.
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😊I’m glad you think so
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Oh what a beautiful post. Great close up of that leaf. 😀
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😊thank yoi
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Delightful response.
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Thank you
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Gorgeous.
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Thanks be to you 🙏
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
S.S.’ latest #tanka for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Thank you
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“…auguring winter…” love this! ❤
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☺️Thank you for writing in. I’m glad you do
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Just magical! 😍✨
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That first line is so vivid! Amazing tanka.
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Thanks so much for really reading. I value your comments. You’re an amazing writer
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Thank you! 😀
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