eulogy of seasons
scripting precice perfect pasts
when present is tense
rearview mirror reflections
capturing hopeful destinies
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Mindfills by s.s. for
Colleen Cheesebro’s Tanka Tuesdays
Neeraj, host of MindLoveMisery’s photo challenge
FOWC eulogy
eulogy ~ a tanka
Mindfills 
11 responses to “eulogy ~ a tanka”
A lovely paradox, especially the last half of your tanka.
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😊thank you so much for reading. Your comment means a lot to me
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Deep deep lines,
“When present is tense”
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And it is don’t you think?
thank you so much for really reading
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Excellent! These lines: “eulogy of seasons, scripting precice perfect pasts, when present is tense…” creating your own reality is all I could think of! Very profound. ❤
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Thank you Colleen. Tanka Tuesdays have kept me inspired. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Thank you for taking the time to read and write in
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You’re so welcome. I love these poems! Always fun to write poetry. ❤️
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Beautiful poem and impressive photo!
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and write in 🙏 Really appreciate it. The photo credit goes to H Lee. The photo is part of Neeraj’s weekly photo challenge on MindLoveMisery
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