
stars put together
a celestial surprise
my little beings
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when on earth and sky
a momentous magic wand
spells an equinox
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welcoming seasons
night wakes in wonder wishing
you sparkling new days
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Written with all my love for R and D my son and daughter… both born on an equinox. 22nd September and 23rd September, two years apart. It’s been all joy Chels. Happy Birthday my little beings.
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…and also written for
Frank Tassone’s Haikai Challenge Shubun – Autumn (spring) equinox – a haiku sequence
Eugi’s weekly prompt – cosmos
Colleen’s Tanka Tuesdays night sky
Crispina Kemp’s creative challenge 97
Happy Birthday R and D π€
awwww
how old are they?
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Not so little beings π
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That is beautiful. Done for your children. I love it…. π
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Thank you β€οΈ
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Love it. I’ve re-posted this one as well. π https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/09/22/shubun-equinox-s-s-mindfills/
Thanks and all the best.
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Thank you so much. So kind of youπ
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Beautifully written β€οΈ Wow. Just a day and two years apart! Happy Birthday to R and D.
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Thank you Shweta β€οΈ
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Lovely π
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Thank you. Means much to me π
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How lovely and Happy Birthday to R and D! π π π Thank you so much for joining in.
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Thank you for your kind wishes βΊοΈβ€οΈ
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Birthday wishes to your children.
Loved your write. π
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Thank you Gautam for your kind words. Bless you
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What a beautiful haiku series! Well done, Crispina! Excellent! Happy Birthday to your babies.
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Thank you Colleen π
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #7: S.S.’ latest haiku #sequence for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Just learned about solstices and equinoxes in science.
Great poem!
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Thanks Chloe…I too learned something new π
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Aww…happy belated birthday to both of them. β€
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Hey..thank you so much
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So beautiful
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Thank you Jude π
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My pleasure πΌ
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Lovely, happy birthday to your little ones. x
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Thank you so muchπ
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Nice dedications to your lucky equinox children β€
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Thank you so much Jade π
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You’re welcome.
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