angry winds spiral
corralling cumulous clouds
to rain down havoc
Autumn squares brawny shoulder
bracing for bitter onslaught
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Colleen’s Tanka Tuesdays – circled and squared – by Jules
Frank J Tassone’s Haikai challenge #151 – first (autumn) storm – hatsu arashi
Mindfills 
18 responses to “hatsu arashi ~ a tanka”
I love the autumn storms, well as long as I am sheltered safely inside my home, that is😁. You tanka is wonderful. Thanks for sharing
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Haha.. yeah..the skies look dramatic when we are inside and run-for-cover dangerous if we are out.
Thank you so much for reading 🙂
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My pleasure.
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Excellent depiction of the furies of Autumn. ❤
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Thank you. Glad you liked it
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (8/13/20): S.S.’ latest #tanka for my current #Haikai Challenge!
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Oh thank you so much ❤️😊 So lovely of you
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You’re welcome, S.S.
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This is a beautiful response 🌼
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Glad you liked it
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My pleasure 🌼
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Autumn is my favorite season. Thanks for attending my words for Tanka Tuesday.
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Oh thank you. I wanted to visit and sent a request 🙂
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Thank you
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