cubist sees

jagged landscapes in

divine debauched disarray

~ soul blissed in sublime

*

caterpillar bores

layered cabbage labyrinth

~ tasting geometry

*

in scattered tenses

disparate thoughts tesselate

~ speaking single truth

***

Mindfills by s.s. for

Reena’s exploration challenge #146 – cubism – Thank you Reena for such an interesting challenge. Pablo Picasso said “Art is a lie that enables us to realise the truth” … a thought that helped these words write

Frank Tassone’s Haiku sequence in dVerse MTB – Thank you Frank Tassone for sharing your knowledge, craft on this beautiful poetic form. Truly inspiring.

21 thoughts on “cubist sees

  1. This is amazing. The meter, perfect. The haiku sequence, perfect. Alliteration, perfect. And the imagery? It’s mind-blowing; I’m just stunned at what imagery your lines evoke for me, like with this one:

    “…layered cabbage labyrinth
    ~ tasting geometry…”

    That is beautiful and amazing. What a fantastic take on the prompt. It’s very well-written and enjoyable to read from start to finish. Lovely work! ❤

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