jagged landscapes in
divine debauched disarray
~ soul blissed in sublime
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caterpillar bores
layered cabbage labyrinth
~ tasting geometry
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in scattered tenses
disparate thoughts tesselate
~ speaking single truth
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Mindfills by s.s. for
Reena’s exploration challenge #146 – cubism – Thank you Reena for such an interesting challenge. Pablo Picasso said “Art is a lie that enables us to realise the truth” … a thought that helped these words write
Frank Tassone’s Haiku sequence in dVerse MTB – Thank you Frank Tassone for sharing your knowledge, craft on this beautiful poetic form. Truly inspiring.
Mindfills 
A sublime encounter with the surreal. Well done!
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Thank you so much. Your words are truly valued.
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This is amazing. The meter, perfect. The haiku sequence, perfect. Alliteration, perfect. And the imagery? It’s mind-blowing; I’m just stunned at what imagery your lines evoke for me, like with this one:
“…layered cabbage labyrinth
~ tasting geometry…”
That is beautiful and amazing. What a fantastic take on the prompt. It’s very well-written and enjoyable to read from start to finish. Lovely work! ❤
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Thank you so much for really reading and for your insight into the elements of the composition. I’m truly grateful.
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Tasting geometry – I like what the cubist sees.
Also, would appreciate it if you can visit and comment on some poems in Mr.Linky. Have a good weekend.
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Thank you. I absolutely will. My pleasure.
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Outstanding piece! Each stanza is so perfect.
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Thank you so much. Was wondering if they all fit together or if it was only in my head
Thank you so much for your encouragement
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They fit in beautifully, like links in a chain. IMO, our minds do this in a manner unknown to us.
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You’re so right. Our minds do
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Cubist sees ….. by mindfills
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Thank you
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Your haiku series is exquisite in imagery. Haiku is probably the best written form to describe cubism…
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You’re right. Haiku does work well for cubism
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The geometry in the cabbage labyrinth sounds delicious. 🙂
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Haha worm-eye view
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I love how your words encapsulate (cubism) the imagery of the art form. Well done.
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Thank you. I truly value your appreciation 🙏
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You’re so welcome. ❤
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