moyuru ~ a tanka

s.s. poetry July 12, 2020July 27, 2020 1 Minute

teasing summer’s

jealoused smouldering tempests

~ slivers of wild wind

clouds line up fire hydrants

rain-drenched in mischief

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moyuru has been featured in Sammi Cox’s Whispers and Echoes – an online journal of short writing. My most sincere gratitude Sammi Cox 🙏

Photo – skies decide … Corbett National Park, 2016

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Published July 12, 2020July 27, 2020

Frank J. Tassone says:

July 13, 2020 at 3:28 pm

Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #5: S.S.’ latest #tanka for my current #haikai challenge!

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1. s.s. says:
  
  July 13, 2020 at 4:12 pm
  
  Thank you🙏
  
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petrujviljoen says:

July 13, 2020 at 3:39 pm

Loved it!

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1. s.s. says:
  
  July 13, 2020 at 4:13 pm
  
  Thank you so much! Happy you did
  
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msjadeli says:

July 18, 2020 at 5:37 pm

I like the idea of aspects of weather teasing each other. Nicely done and a wonderful photo to go with it.

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1. s.s. says:
  
  July 18, 2020 at 5:44 pm
  
  The elements have their own conversations don’t you think? 😊
  Thank you for reading …and writing in. Truly value your comment 🙏
  
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  1. msjadeli says:
    
    July 18, 2020 at 6:04 pm
    
    Yes, I do, and you are very welcome.
    
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