
Only in our imagination
composed of light reflection,
wily deception
of the sun
~ Sky
Optic nerves create an illusion,
blue canopy delusion
wily deception
of the sun
Sigh!
Omnipresent, bridging horizons
as heaven’s dominion
wily deception
of the sun
Why?
Crispina Kemp creative challenge 87
MindLoveMisery’s Saturday mix #11 Trinquint
Triquint, a poem for created by Sylvia A. Feeley, which consists of 3 verses, 5 lines each. Lines 3 and 4 of verse 1 (Refrain) repeat in verses 2 and 3. The syllable count for each stanza is 9, 7, 5, 3, 1 and has an aaAAb rhyme scheme.
Penable’s Thursday Poetry competition – start verse with same letter
16 responses to “Sky”
Nodding in appreciation… 🙂
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😀 such a sweet comment …thank you
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🙂
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I like ‘wily deception’ of the sun’.
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Haha…the sky sort of is… isn’t it?
Thank you for reading and writing in 🙏
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Yes. It is 🙂
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Wow Sangeeta..
I loved this one..
Great play with the words and of course the prompts ! Well done !!
I see some different ones now ( other than Haiku :P)
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Thank you Nima. Yeah…trinquint😄
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Glad you did !! beautifully done 🙂
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Had to look it up… was fun to try
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And it came out great !! ❤
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Thank you Nima for your kind encouragement
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Always my pleasure 😊🧡
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Very nice poem!
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Thank you. Glad you liked 🙂
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