Wind vanes still clatter
a cacophonous parody
disrupting silence
of the directionless dead
buried underneath
pretty, sugarcoated,
burnt cover of pasts
crashed, scattered
in golden, serrated trails
of cartwheeling Time,
who smugly sneers
at mankind
making risible attempts
at an augean existence
beyond death
*
Mindfills for
Augean
Risibility
Cartwheel
Live
Fragile
Pretty
Crash
Golden
Sugar
Underneath
Burn
Cover
I really liked the visuals created by your words. Beautifully written.
Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.
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I really liked how you’ve combined all the prompts to creat this beautiful piece 🙂
Pls check out my uptake as well!
https://themysticwagon.wordpress.com/2020/06/25/the-beginning-of-the-novel-in-ancient-times/
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You’ve been doing great at combining challenges too. I liked your short fiction pieces
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Thank you 😊
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I really like the cartwheeling time and then, although the whole poem is good, the ending is just so perfect.
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Thank you. Your words encourage me. Im so glad you really read it
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Yes, I do actually read the posts. I love genuine feedback so I try to give it!
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I truly appreciate that. Thank you
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